ext_19785 ([identity profile] sg-lab.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sg_lab2 2006-05-29 04:57 am (UTC)

Yeah, I always look at the reviews to see of there's any constructive comments. If not I tend to give it a pass or just say I liked it.

Sometimes I find mechanical errors. Like spelling, tense shifting (which drives me crazy if you hadn't noticed ;)) or putting two quotes from two different people in the same paragraph. I think sometimes this is something that gets a negative response to as being nitpicky sometimes. I may be wrong. It just a sense I get.

Other times it's characterization.

There are some things that I have a hard time explaining what I see as the problem and that makes it difficult too. I read a fic once where the author tended tell more than show. Actually she did both. I tried to tell her she needed to show instead of tell, but I couldn't figure out how to explain how to do that. Thinking back I think she did show, but told on top of that and if she just got rid of the telling she would have been fine.

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