http://little-whispers.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] little-whispers.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sg_lab2 2007-08-22 07:07 pm (UTC)

Wow for a first attempt that was very good. I liked how you managed to fit so much description into such a short piece.

Have you thought of posting this on [livejournal.com profile] spark_daily? I think it would be well recieved! :D

Keep it up!
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