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Title: The Clay Pot
Author: sg_lab
Rating: G
Pairing: Sheppard/Weir
Genre: Angst
Spoilers: This set early s4. Vague reference to character changes
Summary: John needs to hold onto something

John walked through the halls of Atlantis. His pack was tucked securely under his arm.

He looked back a couple of times to see if anyone was following him. It wasn’t a big deal; he just didn’t want to answer any questions. He didn’t want sympathetic eyes to look at him. And he didn’t want to see a look of someone who knew what he was feeling because they had been there too.

He entered his quarters and locked the door. Opening the pack, he pulled out the handmade clay pot. With care he set it down next to a picture of a woman with long brown curly hair.

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*gosebumps* ok that was beautiful and sad *tears*

He didn’t want sympathetic eyes to look at him. And he didn’t want to see a look of someone who knew what he was feeling because they had been there too.
Deffinatly my favourite part. It's so real.

Thank you. I loved that paragraph.

I started with the "he didn't want to answer any questions" and the next two lines just came to me. Each line represented a different member of his team to me. The questions was Rodney. The sympathetic eyes were Teyla. And the one who knew what he was feeling was Ronon.

Thats an interesting way to look at the situation. I like that you did something new :D

;.; Oh dear angst. You kill me. Nicely done, darling!

Thank you. I didn't think I had it in me to write an angsty drabble. I'm more of the long fic angsty writer...er something like that. :D

*hugs you* Beautiful I can imagine him doing that. Actually a scene like that would be so wonderful to see, very in character for him and a great connection to an amazing moment from season one. *hugs you again*

*Hugs back* Thank you. I'm hoping we see the little pot and some attention is given to it. But you know if not, I still have my little drabble. :)

I second that my dear. Thanx for this lovely piece. More please? *wink wink*

LOL, I must say it is fun writing drabbles. I'm very new to writing them.

And I'm still working on this very long fic I've working on for a few months now.

*slaps herself* Still haven't read it. But I know the idea and I like it very much.

Yeah I was surprised when i discovered I can write drabbles too. *shock* :D

Beautiful, heartbreaking, and spot on. I can so see John seclude himself like that. Thank you.

I concur with pixilove66, this paragraph is awesome.

Thank you. :)

Very beautiful and poignant.
Thank you for sharing.

Oooh, sad and beautiful! Lovely!

*emo cry* ;_~

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