Thank you. That whole scene with John and Elizabeth was the hardest part of this chapter. I had different plans for them, but I guess they just weren't ready for what I had in mind.
*is embarrassed* I kinda forgot Jeannie at the beginning of the story. :0
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Date: 2008-11-09 09:32 pm (UTC)*is embarrassed* I kinda forgot Jeannie at the beginning of the story. :0