Love this! Poor Daniel...looks like he just doesn't know what's hit him. Loved the scene with Sam. How funny that she could see it before Danny could! I think you're writing Daniel's POV very well. I can see his face clearly as I read. Really loved two chapters in one day!! I'm in fan fic heaven!
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Date: 2009-01-26 08:18 pm (UTC)I think you're writing Daniel's POV very well. I can see his face clearly as I read.
Really loved two chapters in one day!! I'm in fan fic heaven!