Heh, thanks. The paragraph describing Maddison drag Ronon off for tea was the little bit of inspiration. I couldn't resist image. It cracked me up. :)
The John/Rodney part was tricky. I wasn't sure how to write it without writing a scene that focused only on them.
I was trying to write a little conversation between Elizabeth and Marc where they start a conversation about having kids, but it was just falling flat for me. I may pick it up in the next part with Jean and Maddison still on Atlantis.
It's so true, what little girl wouldn't have a crush on those three? :D
Thank you for pointing at what you liked. And I like your icon. Chewie. :D
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Date: 2006-10-24 01:15 am (UTC)The John/Rodney part was tricky. I wasn't sure how to write it without writing a scene that focused only on them.
I was trying to write a little conversation between Elizabeth and Marc where they start a conversation about having kids, but it was just falling flat for me. I may pick it up in the next part with Jean and Maddison still on Atlantis.
It's so true, what little girl wouldn't have a crush on those three? :D
Thank you for pointing at what you liked. And I like your icon. Chewie. :D