Fic: That's My Wife

[sg_lab2]

Title: That’s My Wife
Author: sglab
Rating: G
Type: Humor
Pairing: Sheppard/Weir
A/N: My first attempt at a drabble. Exactly 100 words is not an easy task. Four words shy. Inspired from a scene I wrote in a fic I'm working on.
Spoilers: No
Feedback: Please

X-posted to john_elizabeth and spark_daily

Standing on a new planet, John explained the situation to Elizabeth. He could feel the anger growing within her.

Straightening her shoulders and raising her chin; Elizabeth turned on her heel and walked toward the leader of the planet. She stared at the small man zeroing in on him like a heat seeking missile. Within a few minutes, Elizabeth had the little man cowering in his chair.

John heard a light chuckle to his right and turned to look at Ronon’s smiling face. With a proud smile John looked at Elizabeth and said. “That’s my wife.”

Comments

[little-whispers.livejournal.com]

Wow for a first attempt that was very good. I liked how you managed to fit so much description into such a short piece.

Have you thought of posting this on spark_daily? I think it would be well recieved! :D

Keep it up!

[sg-lab.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Appreciate the feedback. I was just thinking about posting it there. I've been a watcher of that comm for awhile now and suddenly got inspired. :)

[little-whispers.livejournal.com]

That's ok it's nice to get feedback on something you're not quite sure on. I think you should it's always nice to see new writers there. I like where your inspiration took you.

[luxuria-oceanus.livejournal.com]

Awwwww, that's cute. Go Liz *cheer* And oh, John lol

[chris4short.livejournal.com]

Very good fic!! And this is your first? Awesome job! And go Elizabeth!

[sg-lab.livejournal.com]

Thank you. It was fun to write.

[sg-lab.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Yep, it was my first. At the moment I'm working on a fic that's up to twenty chapters. And most of my fic are at least a few pages long.

[chris4short.livejournal.com]

Very good! I can't wait to read the rest of your works!

[sunny-serenity.livejournal.com]

*applauds* Most excellent attempt and very well succeeded may I add.

[sg-lab.livejournal.com]

:) Thank you.

[speckleberry.livejournal.com]

Recruiting for the cause, Sammi, i like it!

[speckleberry.livejournal.com]

This was wonderful, i love those 'Elizabeth comes to defend John', fics...they're cute.

Very nicely done!

[sg-lab.livejournal.com]

Thank you. spark_daily is a great comm, I'm glad you started it. :)

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Eeeeee! Cute! XD

[violettavalery.livejournal.com]

Aww, good job! That was really cute.

[hopalong-pxp.livejournal.com]

That was very good! I know drabbles are hard to write, you did very well.

[jackfan2.livejournal.com]

LOL.. well, all I can say is, wherever the fic is that inspired this lovely drabble (brilliantly done too! Drabbles are VERY difficult to convey) I want it yesterday!

Any word on when said fic might be done? ETA? Anything? If it inspired this, I'm game and anxious to read.

[sg-lab.livejournal.com]

Thank you. The inspiration for the drabble came from a scene in a chapter I'm working on right now. It was a small moment.

I posted the first chapter of the fic on john_elizabeth comm. today. It's called Adopting Rodney. Here's (http://sg-lab.livejournal.com/54729.html#cutid1) a link to the first chapter if you're interested. I'll be posting another chapter tomorrow.

[little-whispers.livejournal.com]

Lol well you know me always up for pimping things lol :D

If only it worked so well with wex_daily :D

[vickysg1.livejournal.com]

Such a cute one!

[hoperomantic.livejournal.com]

*hee* *grin* Thanks for sharing this.

[kinky-carter.livejournal.com]

Hehe, that's so cute and funny, awesome little piece here. :P

[sg-lab.livejournal.com]

Thank you. :)

[kinky-carter.livejournal.com]

You're welcome. :P