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[sg_lab2]

So I'm having a bit of difficulty with my latest SGA fic. As John is dealing with the loss of his team I want him to come across reminders of them and describe specific moments between him and the others individually. Rodney is easy. I can think of a lot of things to relate John's relationship with him. But Teyla and Ronon aren't so easy. Not that I don't think it would be painful for John to lose Ronon and or Teyla, but I just don't see John close to them in the same way as I do with Rodney.

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[anuna-81.livejournal.com]

Can I help? (I still have to read fic! I don't hjave time! Damn!)

Ronon - every time John sits to eat, he remembers Ronon and how he tried to taught him table manners. It's something so ordinary and everyday, that's why the impact could/would be bigger.

Teyla - lot of things could remind him of Teyla. Every time he passes the gym. Every time he sits in the puddle jumper he could remeber the moment when they saw the storm high from the sky. Every time someone mentions Athosians or banto sticks.... lot of things are connected to Teyla.

If you need to bounce ideas or discuss, I'm here :)

[sg-lab.livejournal.com]

Oh thank you. I hoped you'd respond. I think I have an idea. :)