To a few fanfic writers I've seen recently

[sg_lab2]

OMG! Spell check does not check for the correctly spelled wrong word people.

And while I'm ranting, those paragraphs you've written could probably be split up into at least four or five separate paragraphs.

Comments

[gwenhwyfar1984.livejournal.com]

I agree with the first part.
Not the second because things like that are more the preference of the writer. I know I sometimes use larger paragraphs to help with the intensity and flow of the scene. Some people don't like it but then if they are focusing on form then they are obviously not that into the fic so oh well...lol.

[sg-lab.livejournal.com]

The issue I have with these long paragraphs is they have several different subjects going on when a paragraph should be focused on one point.

Plus I just find it hard on my eyes.

[gwenhwyfar1984.livejournal.com]

Ah I see. I thought you meant long paragraphs in general, lol.

[sg-lab.livejournal.com]

Yeaah, sorry about that. I realized later I probably wasn't clear on what I meant.